To My Mom
A 5-7-5 Poem18 total reviews
Comment from Shanbreen
What a beautiful tribute to your Mom. It brings back memories of how much my Mom meant to me. Sometimes, I wish I had been a better son, but as you mention, my mother, too, "never wanders away from me."
All the best for the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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What a beautiful tribute to your Mom. It brings back memories of how much my Mom meant to me. Sometimes, I wish I had been a better son, but as you mention, my mother, too, "never wanders away from me."
All the best for the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you for your very understanding comments, and six stars, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
A wonderful sentiment to share with your dear mother. In even this short verse the strength of a shared life shines through beautifully.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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A wonderful sentiment to share with your dear mother. In even this short verse the strength of a shared life shines through beautifully.
Wishing you great luck with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 05-May-2024
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Thank you so very much, Gloria, for your wonderful and very understanding comments, hope my mom reads it the same way on Mothers Day, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Kahpot, I'm sorry that I missed this one. It was buried in my in-box. However, your poem is sweet and filled with love, and high sensory appeal. Your mother must have been thrilled to read this. A mom to be proud of, a son to be proud of, and a poem to be proud of--a perfect trifecta.
Beautiful photo. Well done. Sincerely, Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Hello Kahpot, I'm sorry that I missed this one. It was buried in my in-box. However, your poem is sweet and filled with love, and high sensory appeal. Your mother must have been thrilled to read this. A mom to be proud of, a son to be proud of, and a poem to be proud of--a perfect trifecta.
Beautiful photo. Well done. Sincerely, Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 04-May-2024
reply by the author on 04-May-2024
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Thank you, Magaret, my mom will get to read this on Mother's Day, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
This is very sweet. Did you write this when you were younger? Or have you mellowed with age? I am reminding everyone that I am moving May 18th, so I may not be seen for a few days. Busy busy. Karen
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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This is very sweet. Did you write this when you were younger? Or have you mellowed with age? I am reminding everyone that I am moving May 18th, so I may not be seen for a few days. Busy busy. Karen
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you, Karen, no, my birthday and Mother's Day are near the same day, so I think of her more at this time, travel safe, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
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Thank you. Karen
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation. It's a sweet poem for your mom. Good luck
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation. It's a sweet poem for your mom. Good luck
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you, Marival, for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What do you mean: you never wandered. She has always been in your heart. Is that right? It's so nice that you are or were so close to your mom. It's different for me.
Well done.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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What do you mean: you never wandered. She has always been in your heart. Is that right? It's so nice that you are or were so close to your mom. It's different for me.
Well done.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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"you never wandered" refers to my mom, (she never wandered) for that I am happy, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. What a lovely tribute to a mother. Anyone who can write such a statement has been blessed. thanks for sharing and good luck.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. What a lovely tribute to a mother. Anyone who can write such a statement has been blessed. thanks for sharing and good luck.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your very understanding comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from patcelaw
Mothers who spend their time very wisely with their children are to be praised and I enjoyed your 575 poem very much. You are blessed to have had a mother who could do this for you. Patricia .
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Mothers who spend their time very wisely with their children are to be praised and I enjoyed your 575 poem very much. You are blessed to have had a mother who could do this for you. Patricia .
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Patricia, yes, I am very lucky, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, To My Mom, has the proper formatting and sends out a thank you for the steadfast posture of a mother who stood by her family through the times.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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This 5-7-5, To My Mom, has the proper formatting and sends out a thank you for the steadfast posture of a mother who stood by her family through the times.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Bill, yes, she is so good, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
Comment from Idawiesenfeld
This poem is short, but even though it's only 3 lines, it is an extremely powerful. It conveys an emotional; the type of message that people can relate too. Well done! It's written really well and the picture goes great with it.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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This poem is short, but even though it's only 3 lines, it is an extremely powerful. It conveys an emotional; the type of message that people can relate too. Well done! It's written really well and the picture goes great with it.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your wonderful comments, as always very much appreciated****kahpot
