Lair Of The Seductress
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "An Old Acquaintance "Book Four Wolf Bend Series
7 total reviews
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Well written. Good plot movement.
But I don't understand why Lillith would let Nick go. It doesn't sound in character.
Good luck with the story.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Well written. Good plot movement.
But I don't understand why Lillith would let Nick go. It doesn't sound in character.
Good luck with the story.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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That is a huge clue as to her motive. You found it even with all the nonsense I was throwing at you!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am guessing Nick got turned down because he doesn't have a girlfriend or a wife, so he's not cheating on anybody. He's just your everyday pervert. Am I right??? I really like this story and especially Greg. Good job writing.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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I am guessing Nick got turned down because he doesn't have a girlfriend or a wife, so he's not cheating on anybody. He's just your everyday pervert. Am I right??? I really like this story and especially Greg. Good job writing.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Are you sure you weren't a detective? You hit on the key gain here, while others asked me what was the point of this chapter.
Thanks for the great review, my friend!
D
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Maybe living with a Forensic Science expert for over 40 years helps???
Comment from royowen
Some. lame brain called Nick comes to see Greg, asking for protection from someone he correctly called the crazy man killer, he was into her until he spotted that tattoo, and pushed her out of his vehicle, he was luck, and Greg says that he has nothing to fear from her. Well done Douglas, great story and episeide, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Some. lame brain called Nick comes to see Greg, asking for protection from someone he correctly called the crazy man killer, he was into her until he spotted that tattoo, and pushed her out of his vehicle, he was luck, and Greg says that he has nothing to fear from her. Well done Douglas, great story and episeide, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Thanks for hanging in, Roy! Appreciate you.
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Bless you Douglas
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Once again, Doug, you absolutely excel in your dialogue and this interview fully captures both the 'disgusting' and the 'disgusted' contrasting characters of Nicky and Greg. To add some light relief to the content of the discussion, you add humour to the mix ( references to needing a shower) so that, by the end, even the reader is wishing for the same! Has the interview got Greg any closer? Well, we do see another side to Lilith which could be interesting. Either that or she was too disgusted as well! Thanks for sharing Debbie
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Once again, Doug, you absolutely excel in your dialogue and this interview fully captures both the 'disgusting' and the 'disgusted' contrasting characters of Nicky and Greg. To add some light relief to the content of the discussion, you add humour to the mix ( references to needing a shower) so that, by the end, even the reader is wishing for the same! Has the interview got Greg any closer? Well, we do see another side to Lilith which could be interesting. Either that or she was too disgusted as well! Thanks for sharing Debbie
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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There was a good clue mixed in there. Thanks for the great review, my friend!
Comment from Julie Helms
Wow, this was incredibly well written. (This includes the first part, too, which I hadn't read before since I was a latecomer). Great dialogue and character development. You develop slimy SO WELL! You had me completely repulsed from the get-go!
When I get some time, I should go back and read from the beginning, but regardless even missing some context, the writing here blew me away.
No errors noted.
Julie
:-)
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Wow, this was incredibly well written. (This includes the first part, too, which I hadn't read before since I was a latecomer). Great dialogue and character development. You develop slimy SO WELL! You had me completely repulsed from the get-go!
When I get some time, I should go back and read from the beginning, but regardless even missing some context, the writing here blew me away.
No errors noted.
Julie
:-)
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Julie. You are so kind. This was a fun chapter!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was well done. The dialogue between Greg and Nicky is both colorful and cringe-inducing. Nicky's crude and boastful demeanor contrasts sharply with Greg's professional and exasperated responses, creating a tension filled exchange that is both funny and maybe a little uncomfortable. You do a great job in this chapter of showing us who they are and developing these characters. Great job.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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I thought this was well done. The dialogue between Greg and Nicky is both colorful and cringe-inducing. Nicky's crude and boastful demeanor contrasts sharply with Greg's professional and exasperated responses, creating a tension filled exchange that is both funny and maybe a little uncomfortable. You do a great job in this chapter of showing us who they are and developing these characters. Great job.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Michael. A fun chapter!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Did I not read recent chapters
Nothing was familiar in the first half of this release
Finally commonality became apparent halfway through
Got to be patient and see what is ahead
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Did I not read recent chapters
Nothing was familiar in the first half of this release
Finally commonality became apparent halfway through
Got to be patient and see what is ahead
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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The first half was an excerpt from a previous book to remind readers who Nick was.
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aah. I began then at a disadvantage. Mea culpa?
