The Perfect Crime
Frame the dog!21 total reviews
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The story could be good as I get the idea> The problem is that whiskers licked her paws as if she had eaten and then promises to come back and dig the fish up> mY COMPUTER LET ME READ YOUR STORY BUT REFUSES TO BEHAVE OTHERWISE. oR I COULD ALL BE ME NOT CATCHING ON.
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reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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The story could be good as I get the idea> The problem is that whiskers licked her paws as if she had eaten and then promises to come back and dig the fish up> mY COMPUTER LET ME READ YOUR STORY BUT REFUSES TO BEHAVE OTHERWISE. oR I COULD ALL BE ME NOT CATCHING ON.
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Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Hi Carol...Whiskers licked her paws because she had been catching Lester in the fish tank. Then she got Max to chase her so the bowl got knocked over and he got the blame for killing the fish. Max got in trouble and Whiskers went back for her dinner. That's it in a nut shell. LOL
Comment from robyn corum
HAHAHAHA!
Hello, dear one! My, I've missed you. And this kind of cheeky, sweet short fun fiction. Don't tell anyone, but I'm pretty sure the cat did it. I do not want her to know I said that though... cats are notoriously good with those claws. YIKES.
Thanks for the smile!
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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HAHAHAHA!
Hello, dear one! My, I've missed you. And this kind of cheeky, sweet short fun fiction. Don't tell anyone, but I'm pretty sure the cat did it. I do not want her to know I said that though... cats are notoriously good with those claws. YIKES.
Thanks for the smile!
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Yes, they are and quite sneaky too! Poor Max got all the blame and he was framed.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Mark Jackson
Before I start I am going to let you know I write poetry and I am new to Flash Fiction so do not take anything I say very seriously. I am new to this. I did find your story quite hard to follow as in who was who and who was animal and who human. That said I got the gist and like the punch line if that is what it is called.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Before I start I am going to let you know I write poetry and I am new to Flash Fiction so do not take anything I say very seriously. I am new to this. I did find your story quite hard to follow as in who was who and who was animal and who human. That said I got the gist and like the punch line if that is what it is called.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Hi Mark. We make a good team then because I rarely do poetry....usually I am a mystery and crime kind of writer. But thank you for stopping by and giving these short flashes a try. They are fun to write.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a cute story for the flash contest. I love the picture of the cat watching the fish. Yes, she committed the perfect crime, and swallowed the evidence, it seems. Children would enjoy reading this story. Hugs! Carol
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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This is a cute story for the flash contest. I love the picture of the cat watching the fish. Yes, she committed the perfect crime, and swallowed the evidence, it seems. Children would enjoy reading this story. Hugs! Carol
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Those felines can be sneaky little buddies and poor Max got all the blame. I am sure that in someway he will pay her back too!
Smiles, Carol
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Sounds like a series of stories coming up. That would be a cute children's book. Hugs!
Comment from jessizero
You told a very funny story in just eighty words! It was indeed the perfect crime. LOL. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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You told a very funny story in just eighty words! It was indeed the perfect crime. LOL. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thanks Jess for reading this flash and reviewing. Yes, Whiskers was sneaky enough to figure out how to catch the fish and put the blame on Max.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
lol. Cats! Naughty thing blaming Max, and of course demolishing the evidence. You wrote this flash very well, and chose a very good image to accompany it. Best wishes for the flash contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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lol. Cats! Naughty thing blaming Max, and of course demolishing the evidence. You wrote this flash very well, and chose a very good image to accompany it. Best wishes for the flash contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 17-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much, Wendy. I guess Whiskers feel her nine lives gives her the entitlement to do naughty things.... but blaming poor Max, not a good thing. Thanks for enjoying this flash.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Well I can say this about my cats killing my plants, because a fish will not survive for sure in my house. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Well I can say this about my cats killing my plants, because a fish will not survive for sure in my house. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thanks IZA. I could see the cat with her paw in the fish bowl, batting at it. But blaming poor, overgrown Max for her dastardly deed was so unacceptable. Smiles and thank you - Carol
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, they are unscrupulous aren't they, they get away with 'murder' no conscience arall, we've owned 12 cats in all over the years, loved the, all, but what Thanks did we get, not one of them paid board and lodging, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Heh heh, they are unscrupulous aren't they, they get away with 'murder' no conscience arall, we've owned 12 cats in all over the years, loved the, all, but what Thanks did we get, not one of them paid board and lodging, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Those sneaky little felines purr and act so sweet, but their nine lives let them get away with so much. I felt bad for poor Max getting the blame.
Smiles, Carol
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They are aren?t they
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A very nice entry for the 80 Word Flash Fiction contest. This story is very cute. i love the artwork you chose and it adds to the presentation of your piece. good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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A very nice entry for the 80 Word Flash Fiction contest. This story is very cute. i love the artwork you chose and it adds to the presentation of your piece. good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much Marilyn. I appreciate your review and your thoughts. Those silly little cats can get away with so much with their nine lives, but blaming poor Max.... that was cruel.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ulla
Hehehe, I loved it. She'd just committed the perfect crime and knew it that little feline monster. Oh they are like that, aren't they? All the best of luck, Carol. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Hehehe, I loved it. She'd just committed the perfect crime and knew it that little feline monster. Oh they are like that, aren't they? All the best of luck, Carol. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2024
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Hello, Ulla...Thanks for reading about this naughty cat and how poor Max was blamed for her bad deed. Glad you enjoyed.
Smiles, Carol
