Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

This sounded like a fantastical journey. Written about in lore, yet not quite real. The imagery was gorgeous. I liked being on the carp's quest. May he make it to shore. Thanks for sharing. Gretchen

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, Gretchen.

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Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello Gypsy. I enjoyed this Sedoka and the two halves of a whole. You are very adept at this type of writing and I'm glad you didn't use the carp again in the second, reflective, stanza. I enjoyed it.

Melissa

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, Melissa.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Thanks for sharing this fish dream. But like that fish, we also can't desire to be in some other environment that would suffocate us. Sometimes dreams are misleading.

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2024

Thank you very much, big sister.

Love,
Marival

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

lol love this sedoka - has a rebellious spin to it.
great imagery and smooth flow and connection between the lines

thank you for sharing
shelley :)
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 Comment Written 07-Jan-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Jan-2024

Thank you, Shelley.

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