Willing Hearts
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Comment from Begin Again
Good one again, Barbara.
The friction of give and take between Sami and Noah continues, neither willing to take the first step, but both are praying the other one will. I am enjoying the story very much. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
"Are implying my ego can't handle being the first one out every game?" (you)
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Good one again, Barbara.
The friction of give and take between Sami and Noah continues, neither willing to take the first step, but both are praying the other one will. I am enjoying the story very much. Thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Carol
"Are implying my ego can't handle being the first one out every game?" (you)
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I have made the correction and appreciate the help.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, the two of them, Sami and Noah, are starting to get it together. I do hope they will succeed. Well, I'm confident that they will. I love this story as you know. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Hi Barbara, the two of them, Sami and Noah, are starting to get it together. I do hope they will succeed. Well, I'm confident that they will. I love this story as you know. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. I finally got in through my portfolio. I still can't get in by the review notification on the front page.
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I'm glad you can get in by some means. K
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I am not able to get in by normal means. LOL Still haven't heard from Tom, but it's now working normal, so all is good.
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Aw, that's great news,!
Comment from BethShelby
This is a good chapter. You really show to very stubborn people. I wonder how that would work out with them together. I glad it seem resolved at the end of the chapter. A couple of spags...
"I'm guess that's right." I guess that's right or I'm guessing....
What do to do with them What to do with them....
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reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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This is a good chapter. You really show to very stubborn people. I wonder how that would work out with them together. I glad it seem resolved at the end of the chapter. A couple of spags...
"I'm guess that's right." I guess that's right or I'm guessing....
What do to do with them What to do with them....
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from nomi338
Now that is what I'm talking about. I love how despite initial misgivings, the two Sami and Noah are slowly coming together, unforced, and through some murky water, their emotions are starting to right themselves and are beginning to allow them to see eye to eye. I love it. Despite your shortsighted critic, you are among the best authors of serious fiction on site.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Now that is what I'm talking about. I love how despite initial misgivings, the two Sami and Noah are slowly coming together, unforced, and through some murky water, their emotions are starting to right themselves and are beginning to allow them to see eye to eye. I love it. Despite your shortsighted critic, you are among the best authors of serious fiction on site.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2024
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Thank you for the kind review
